tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post768789081771880255..comments2008-02-18T12:18:10.881-08:00Amanda Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01630905497211235099noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-20944041043521730292008-02-18T12:18:00.000-08:002008-02-18T12:18:00.000-08:00Beautiful!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-17004937587849852992008-02-10T15:46:00.000-08:002008-02-10T15:46:00.000-08:00wow. this is so well presented. love the way it carries from the start. lovely the way the stanzas break. images are soft and sexy. very 'sensual' phrasing. a quiet language used here.satinwhitedognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-24595533174270941982008-02-07T05:26:00.000-08:002008-02-07T05:26:00.000-08:00enjambment, indeed!<BR/><BR/>I love "into the surface of still deeper things than eyes"<BR/><BR/>wonderful, Amanda.<BR/><BR/>Bbradnoreply@blogger.com