tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post435583117593747115..comments2008-02-18T13:07:29.396-08:00Amanda Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01630905497211235099noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-489977761661558642008-02-18T13:07:00.000-08:002008-02-18T13:07:00.000-08:00"Murder your darlings"?<BR/><BR/>It has some wonderful phrases, images ... but altogether too many words piled on words for my taste. <BR/><BR/>But heck, I suppose there has to be one of your poems I don't entirely admire!Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-77983502156475887542007-12-01T01:23:00.000-08:002007-12-01T01:23:00.000-08:00Thanks Miguel, this is actually one of my favourite poems.. never gets a lot of online comments.. yet in private communications it seem to be one which is dear to some..<BR/><BR/>A.JoyAmanda Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01630905497211235099noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-40427503732054944552007-11-28T04:32:00.000-08:002007-11-28T04:32:00.000-08:00I enjoyed this "muchly"<BR/><BR/>but for some reason the lines I paste below did not resonate, and to call him a master so early or maybe at all seemed redundant and preemptive<BR/><BR/>~~~<BR/>Mouth, ears, hands, high foreheads, soft necks<BR/>All sensed through shared visions of a master<BR/>~~~<BR/><BR/>except for that tiny little thing in my ear, this itself approaches mastery ... I'll have to read a few more times re the operative verb "approaches" there !!<BR/><BR/> .. Miguel / wwEAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com