tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post2964205508265660051..comments2009-04-21T10:22:48.719-07:00Amanda Joyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01630905497211235099noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-45197070024354962792009-04-21T10:22:00.000-07:002009-04-21T10:22:00.000-07:00i really liked this one Amanda... Its a different voice here... refreshing!tanuj solankihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06593893191851771382noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-3729331687878869752009-02-05T20:04:00.000-08:002009-02-05T20:04:00.000-08:00Nicely done. Like others have said, my favorite bit is the "words that barely / fit in / the throat" part.Gabriel Gadflyhttp://gabrielgadfly.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-67774146448760416972009-01-07T16:10:00.000-08:002009-01-07T16:10:00.000-08:00Hi Amanda, this is great. The sparse layout really adds to the power to the image. <BR/><BR/>I love the ending too, the way it seems to go perfectly flat, and the 'swollen bulb to thumbprint' is great!<BR/><BR/>Ashleymountain-ashhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03913913919862931843noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-36168787837723510762009-01-03T03:45:00.000-08:002009-01-03T03:45:00.000-08:00Amanda<BR/><BR/>Hi! Good blog here - great poems and images!<BR/><BR/>Creeley lives! <BR/><BR/>(I met him here in Auckland once BTW)...<BR/><BR/>I am going to link your Blog to mine (easier to get to for me and others can see it) - I have some interesting links on there (EYELIGHT) if you want to follow any of them up.<BR/><BR/>Cheers, RcihardRichard Taylorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10272507198753290435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-77188110574535751162008-12-29T05:47:00.000-08:002008-12-29T05:47:00.000-08:00Ditto to the previous comment. This is a sensuous, succinct piece. The line "words that barely/ fit in/ the throat" is indeed a keeper. Cheers. Have a blessed new year ahead.S.L. Corsuahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10299376651709536034noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8555114521624356230.post-86005599115548765992008-12-26T17:54:00.000-08:002008-12-26T17:54:00.000-08:00spare and delicate. 'words that barely fit in the throat' - this is superb. GGraham Nunnhttp://grahamnunn.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com