charcoal rasps
vespers
as I try to draw
from memory
a beach near Ise
with soft rocks
that turn to powder
at touch
a gentle slippage
of ritual and
desecration
Wednesday, February 25, 2009
Drawn Resting
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This is very nice. Thank you.
u are so sexy with words
superb images Amanda... so gentle.
Lovely, sensual image.
Thank you all for your comments.
(rolling eyes at JD)
"charcoal rasps
vespers" that's poetry.
last line is perfect resolution.
'charcoal rasps' beautiful!!
i wish i'd written that
Where have you gone to, Amanda Joy, so aptly named? Have you another wonderful poem, or even just a thought to share?
Hi, 'with soft rocks that turn to powder,' lovely, Amanda!
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Thanks
Editor, Diane Smith
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First poem of yours I have read, but it was great! Keep up the great work.
great write.
for your poems, I'm a fan.
my fave is Forearm.
*excited to read more of your works*
keep writing..
What a superstar you are. Your poem in Lost Shark is fabulous, Amanda Joy.
awesome
Simple and beautiful!! keep writing!
I write poems too, mostly about Christian life.
www.scribblejoint.com
I have just discovered your blog.It´s very interesting, I like your poems.
I´m from Argentina and I also write poems.
Regards.
Love the clam serenity of the poem. I really enjoyed the beach imagery.
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I love it! Remarkable ooh-aah-imagery. : )
Mmmm... I like it. Very beautiful.
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Wonderful flow. I really appreciated this one.
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